Grid finished and painted, I really like the size and format, I’ll go over them agin to refine the linework and darken the black and maybe make the faces more realistic. I think the narrative holds together and is paced well. The motif of the wall, road and mountains are good. While a good composition perhaps the action scene should be revised as it is a big energy shift, maybe a more subtle or quiet visualization. Also his journey is quite short, I’d like give an impression of real distance covered.
If developing the narrative I need to decide whether I flesh out this bare bones story, or make companion pieces that link.